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Fragmented Phrases

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What are fragmented phrases?

Fragmented phrases are any incomplete pieces of writing which have the appearance of a sentence, but they are incomplete. All sentences contain sentence fragments, but the problem occurs when an incomplete sentence or sentence fragment (clause or phrase) is used in place of a complete sentence. Example: The student with red hair who has a brother in Grade 6. In order to avoid fragmented phrases in your academic writing, it is important to understand how to use complete sentences and correct punctuation.

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Complete sentences: basic sentence structure

A complete sentence contains two parts: a subject and a predicate.

Subject Predicate (the rest of the sentence)
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The subject indicates what (or whom) the sentence is about. The predicate = verb + complements Complements = everything that tells you more about a person or thing / what is being done / how / where it is being done.
The girl with black hair kicked the soccer ball.
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Complete sentence: The girl with black hair kicked the soccer ball.

Sentence parts: clauses, phrases and words

Components of a sentence While a sentence contains a subject and a predicate, the sentence can be broken into smaller units of meaning. ALF Guide - Fragmented Phrases (7)Parts of speech'Parts of speech' are the words that make up a complete sentence. Nouns and verbs are examples of parts of speech.
Subject Verb Object
(eg. who) (does) (what)
The girl kicked the red ball
Noun Verb Adjective Noun

What is a clause?

A clause is a group of words, or unit of information within a sentence, that contains a subject and a verb.

Main (independent) clauseALF Guide - Fragmented Phrases (8)A main clause makes complete sense on its own.Example: We value assignment writing.Dependent clauseALF Guide - Fragmented Phrases (9)A dependent clause depends on the main clause in order to make complete senseExample: Because we want to improve our critical thinking. (doesn’t make sense on its own)

Example of a complete complex sentence:We value assignment writing because we want to improve our critical thinking.

What is a phrase?

A phrase is a group of two or more words which make some sense but do not make complete sense on their own. Example:

  • Won the prize
  • Located in the area
  • Excellent writer
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The smart student ALF Guide - Fragmented Phrases (12) Noun phrase
achieved a high mark ALF Guide - Fragmented Phrases (13) Verb phrase
for the assignment. ALF Guide - Fragmented Phrases (14) Prepositional phrase

Ask yourself - does your sentence make sense on its own?

Example: Being devastating for his future, the student refused.
  • What was devastating?
  • What did the student refuse to do?
Now the sentence makes sense on its own: Even though it would be devastating for his future, the student refused to sit for his final examination.

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Ambiguous phrases and dangling modifiers

Clauses can be changed into modifying phrases only when the subjects of both clauses are the same.

Example of a dangling (disconnected) modifying phrase: While walking to the tutorial room, Anna’s phone rang.

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These clauses cannot be combined like this because they have different subjects: Clause 1: Anna was walking to the tutorial room. (subject - Anna) Clause 2: Anna’s phone rang. (subject - phone) Now the sentence makes sense: While Anna was walking to the tutorial room, her phone rang.

Run-on sentences

Run-on sentences are sentences that run on without the control of joining words or punctuation to separate the different ideas and clarify the meaning of the sentence.Run-on sentences that join two separate ideas with a comma are sometimes called comma splices. Please remember that commas are not used to combine independent clauses.RemediesYou can usually correct run-on sentences by:

  • Using a joining word or conjunction (e.g., for, and, not, but, or, yet, so) to connect the two clauses or ideas
  • Using correct punctuation (not a comma because commas separate items or ideas)
  • Creating two separate sentences (e.g., in the case of very long, run-on sentences)

Correcting a run-on sentence

Example: I was unsure which essay topic to choose, I was too tired to decide.

  1. Correction by use of a joining word: I was unsure which essay topic to choose because I was too tired to decide.
  2. Correction by using appropriate punctuation: I was unsure which essay topic to choose: I was too tired to decide.
  3. Correction by making two separate sentences: I was unsure which essay topic to choose. I was too tired to decide.

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Nontariff barriers (NTB) are aimed at reducing imports. As a result, benefit domestic producers. Some NTBs such as import quotas, voluntary export restraints, subsidies and domestic content requirements have a significant impact on the trade structure. Voluntary export restraints (export quotas) are used to limit the intensity of international competition. While import quotas help small domestic producers to compete with foreign producers who can sell better products at a lower price. To help improve producers’ market positions, governments can provide subsidies. Allowing producers to sell their products at a lower price than the price of production.

Nontariff barriers (NTB) are aimed at reducing imports. As a result, benefit domestic producers. Some NTBs such as import quotas, voluntary export restraints, subsidies and domestic content requirements have a significant impact on the trade structure. Voluntary export restraints (export quotas) are used to limit the intensity of international competition. While export quotas help small domestic producers to compete with foreign producers who can sell better products at a lower price. To help improve producers’ market positions, governments can provide subsidies. Allowing producers to sell their products at a lower price than the price of production.

Nontariff barriers (NTB) are aimed at reducing imports and, as a result, benefit domestic producers. Some NTBs such as import quotas, voluntary export restraints, subsidies and domestic content requirements have a significant impact on the trade structure. Voluntary export restraints (export quotas) are used to limit the intensity of international competition, while import quotas help small domestic producers to compete with foreign producers who can sell better products at a lower price. To help improve producers’ market positions, governments can provide subsidies, allowing producers to sell their products at a lower price than the price of production.

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Apply what you have learnt in this module and click on the correct option(s) below

In developed countries the population is decreasing. While in undeveloped countries it continues to increase. In developed countries the population is decreasing, while in undeveloped countries it continues to increase. While in undeveloped countries the population continues to increase, in developed countries the population. Try again

This sentence correct.

The second sentence is an incomplete thought, or a fragmented phrase. A dependent clause cannot be used as a separate sentence because it doesn’t make sense on its own.

The second part of this sentence is a fragmented phrase. It is lacking important information because the verb phrase (e.g., “is decreasing”) is missing.

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Quick Tip 1

ALF Guide - Fragmented Phrases (17)Sentences should make sense on their own and contain a subject and a predicate.

Quick Tip 2

ALF Guide - Fragmented Phrases (18)Phrases and clauses are smaller components of a sentence and cannot be used on their own in academic paragraphs.

Quick Tip 3

ALF Guide - Fragmented Phrases (19)Sentences need to be joined by appropriate punctuation or conjunctions.

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Resources – grammar books

Azar, B. S. & Hagen, S.A. (2009). Understanding and using English grammar (4th ed.). USA: Pearson Longman.Borjars, K. & Burridge, K. Introducing English grammar (2nd ed.). London: Hodder Education.Foley, M. & Hall, D. (2012). MyGrammarLab (Advanced). England: Pearson.Hewings, M. (2012). Advanced grammar in use: a reference and practice book for advanced students of English (2nd ed.). Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.Murphy, R. (2011). English Grammar in Use (Intermediate) (3 ed.). Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.

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